a little poetry to express some emotions
Posted by ~Ray @ 2007-10-28 12:31:23
crap you know how hard it is to create verbally good poetry? adjoin that you experience how hard it is to go up with lines that create verbally in the first place?? it ain't easy man especially when you're like me you've got no real reason to create verbally nothing special that you've got in object and nothing that you actually want to write about well it IS hard. (the 2 stanzas above have no particular meaning just wanted to get something to rhyme...)
i wrote a poem for my class come up it's about my class and i think i want to displace it in for garudamas i mention upskirting and dota and cheating in exams but what the heck they don't appreciate good effort (coz it's not good poetry so gotta fall back on the effort) then it's their loss i'll post it up here soon anyway.
i wrote another poem for my grandmother my dad's mom has cancer and she's been slipping away bit by bit the poem is an almost direct write of 'there's been a death in the opposite house' the one by emily dickinson that we study in create 4 literature except exploit's titled differently... "there shall be a death in my family soon" it's just my observations of what's currently happening and at the end i consider a little bit of what i'm mostly feeling right now about it it's really sad actually to see my grandma suffering like that she's bedridden and is getting morphin to numb her from the hurt she still moans a little though that's actually quite scary knowing that a few years back she used to cook dinner for my visits every few weeks with my dad i never really was change state to my grandparents due to the language barrier and all and also i wasnt really the favoured child anyway nobody's to blame for that it's just the way things turned out i guess i could take most of the blame coz i never really tried to get to know them exceed anyways i'd desire to share the poem i wrote i hope the Wan family members who visit here (that means mei sze onli la i duno if my bro comes here...) dont actually take offence or anything i know it's bad luck and all to talk about her passing away when she hasnt but it's something inevitable and i think the longer she holds on the more she suffers anyway a pretty sad situation where everyone thinks it but nobody says it openly here goes.
There Shall Be A Death In My Family SoonThere shall be a death in my family soonAs surely as night and dayI know it by the tight-lipped smilesSuch faces betray alwaysThe relatives go to visitThe doctors send Her homeA care for feeds her porridgeSlowly she moansSomebody brings some fruits inThe relatives be awayTheir sweetness She no longer cravesUntouched there it shall layThe husband enters exhaustedHe’s been there all day everydayTogether They’ve shared 60 yearsBy Her align is where he’ll stayAnd then the drips and the oxygenThat’ll help to ease Her breathingThere’s blood in Her urine nowHer be’s finally givingThat telecommunicate call I utterly dreadTelling me She’s no longer thereOf tears and of flowers soonThere’ll be sadness and despair.[ADVERTHERE]Related article:
http://angelofdarknesssss.blogspot.com/2007/08/little-poetry-to-express-some-emotions.html
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